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[*] posted on 13-10-2008 at 11:36 AM
I'm your fault - Michael


Hi everybody, I'm new on forum and this is my first challange too :grins:

Vid Title: I'm your fault
Song Title: Prelude 12/21
Song Artist: AFI
Pairing/Character: Michael
Category: Tribute
Series: SGA
Length: 1:36
Size: 15,95 MB
Format: mpg
Link: Download - http://files.filefront.com/your+faultmpg/;12052643;/fileinfo.html
LiveVideo - http://www.livevideo.com/video/2EED0F77D19743F2875259FEBD9F8CFE/i-m-your-faul...




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[*] posted on 13-10-2008 at 02:53 PM


Welcome to the forum Anijsha and congratualtions on being brave enough to make your first post a challenge entry!

I'll get this listed on Kawoosh! for you this afternoon, but just wanted to let you know that any videos which you post here on the forum are automatically listed on Kawoosh! for you so you don't need to fill in a submission form for them - I got your submission this morning =)

Good luck in the challenge =)
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[*] posted on 14-10-2008 at 04:26 AM


Wow, nice job with your first video on Kawoosh! :) I've always loved this song and I think you really nailed most of the beats. Definitely a lot of creepy/cool parts - my favorite being the switch off from Michael getting shot to him pulling the gun on Teyla, the fade-out there was timed perfectly. Again, great job!

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[*] posted on 15-10-2008 at 11:57 AM


Muppet: Thank you for welcome, luck and mainly for notice:$.

Stef: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. My friend recommended me this song.




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[*] posted on 21-10-2008 at 06:22 AM


Micheal really is their fault, and I think you did a great job portraying that. I really do love the layout of this vid. The song was so emotional, angry, borderline sorrowful. It worked so well. I love the clips you chose and the way you fit them into the beats. The beginning black and white/slight color set up the mood really well. Changing to full color at :20 when he turns around the computer was beautiful, and I really like how well you hit the beat right there. All in all, I loved it.
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[*] posted on 25-10-2008 at 02:25 PM


Very nice job, really good representation of the way Michael was forced to come along. Your song choice was simply perfect to it. The clips you've used fitted nicely to the story you were telling. Timing and effects were also well done.:)



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[*] posted on 11-11-2008 at 02:29 AM


The timings are perfect during the black fades on the drums and then the chorus, but they go off just a bit with the fades during the bells. I think straight cuts would be better there. I love the black fades and love how you manage the timing on them.

I would like to see clips of those at fault interjected into the bunch of Michael clips beginning at ~0:55 to go along with the lyrics.

I didn't feel a full story by the end. The song makes me think it should be Michael as a Wraith but the clip is Michael as a human. Then the end graphic he's a Wraith. I felt confused about what you are saying.

Really good video. I love the song. I love your idea. I love the creepy font on the end graphic!




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