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![[*]](./images/xpsilver/default_icon.gif) posted on 12-10-2008 at 07:33 AM |
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Adria - "The Orici" (SG-1)
Vid Title: The Orici
Song Title: Epicon
Song Artist: Immediate Music
Pairing/Character: Adria
Category: Trailer (or Tribute?)
Series: SG-1
Length: 1:11
Size: 11.95MB
Format: .wmv
CONTAINS "THE ARK OF TRUTH" FOOTAGE
Link: MY LIVEJOURNAL
(DIVSHARE DOWNLOAD/STREAM PAGE)
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| posted on 12-10-2008 at 07:56 PM |
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| posted on 14-10-2008 at 11:13 AM |
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I love your video. The voice layovers were perfect, you told the story seamlessly and I would definitely go see this movie. You did a great job with
this video, as always  I will try to leave more detailed feedback when I
get home from work, right now I am running a little late.
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| posted on 17-10-2008 at 10:34 PM |
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Thanks - both of you. A one word summary? I hope that's because it left you speechless  Yeah, I always wanted to make an Adria trailer, seeing as she's the big baddie of S10...and I loved the music. Glad the VOs worked
-Stef
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| posted on 21-10-2008 at 06:32 AM |
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This vid had a real trailer-ish feeling to it, and it was really cool (although if it was a trailer, it gave away the ending ). I loved the part at :43 when she tells Daniel "It's that simple" the brief
silence in the music and the black screen was really profound. The choir voices were really really effective and the voice overs you chose were also
great. I loved the clip overlays that told numerous stories at the same time, especially around :39 with the burning of the books. Good job.
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| posted on 25-10-2008 at 02:14 PM |
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If your vid would be a real trailer, it shouldn't show the end of Adria's story, I think. But as a vid portraying Adria, it's just perfect. I loved the music, the voice overs telling the story, the clips you've chosen.
Great job!
"There is one thing that I do know is true. Mind is a powerful thing.
No matter who or what you believe in, sometimes belief itself makes
all the difference in the world you just don't give up.
Tell yourself whatever you have to, just believe you're gonna make it."
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| posted on 26-10-2008 at 06:21 AM |
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| Quote: | Originally posted by MythQueen
This vid had a real trailer-ish feeling to it, and it was really cool (although if it was a trailer, it gave away the ending ). I loved the part at :43 when she tells Daniel "It's that simple" the brief
silence in the music and the black screen was really profound. The choir voices were really really effective and the voice overs you chose were also
great. I loved the clip overlays that told numerous stories at the same time, especially around :39 with the burning of the books. Good job.
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| Quote: | Originally posted by Valika
If your vid would be a real trailer, it shouldn't show the end of Adria's story, I think. But as a vid portraying Adria, it's just perfect. I loved the music, the voice overs telling the story, the clips you've chosen.
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Yeah, well I say it's a "trailer" but I guess I never really meant it to be for anyone who hasn't seen S10 & AOT, you know? It's just a
trailer in the sense that it's short and only includes snippets of story...it was always meant to be more of a summary than a teaser. Sorry about the
confusion there 
Thanks for the comments though...I think the "it's just that simple" is also my favorite part, MythQueen.
-Stef
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| posted on 26-10-2008 at 07:03 AM |
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Very impressive. The use of dialogue bits were particularly effective.
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| posted on 11-11-2008 at 02:30 AM |
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Great start and awesome end. The middle is very tense. Scene blending is very smooth. You use the music well. Timings are sharp. The voice-over
context is fabulous!
The voice-over audio start and stop is too obvious. If you use fade in and out on the audio it will help. You could also try adjusting the song
volume at that section to be slightly lower so you then don't have to set the voice volume too high. I recommend using Audacity for song editing.
The clips between 0:54 to 0:57 don't fit well for me. It's right after Adria's statement, “We have free reign in this galaxy.” I think a clip of
Ori ships at a planet during the fade from Adria then the cut to SG-1 running (awesome feel there, btw) then that clip with Vala. This would take
Adria's statement from universal to personal and intensify the end even more.
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Hardware: Home-built desktop, AMD Athlon XP CPU 2.03 GHz, 2 GB RAM, 320 GB and 80 GB internal hard drives, Nvidia GeForce 6800 GS/XT video card.
Software: Windows XP Home SP3, Windows Movie Maker, DVD Shrink 3.2, Windows Media Encoder 9, SUPER © v2009.build.35, Audacity 1.2.6.
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